2nd chapter for Prodigy

Yes! If you read it, you know there's oral sex in it. Woot-woot!

I know that of three of the biggest complaints with my story is the long buildup/few appearances of sex. So, hopefully that will tide people over while I build up the sexual tension and all those fun things.

Two other complaints usually received is my crappy writing skills—which I'm fully aware of and working on—and the confusing pace or jumping around.

Also! Another announcement. I have finished re-writing and editing chapter 1 of Longing to be with you. I personally cringe at reading them and I think that's enough motivation to correct it. I didn't rewrite from scratched. A lot was reused, reworded, rewritten and corrected. So, I'll also make notes whenever I rewrite any old stories' chapters.

So back to Prodigy:

I hope it's clear enough that "Leene" is Celesta, and that she's not a sorceress, but an amazon wearing a sorceresses garb as to fit in with the xenophobic community of the Zann Esu sorceresses. Of course, anyone who skipped right to the sex probably won't realize that, but that's their own loss.

There's still a lot of personal history and reasons missing—with good reason. This particularly applies to Bayard and Celesta too given that they are the newest characters.

I think I should explain that when I say "bard" I don't mean the singing and strumming an instrument type. If any of you have seen the original "Spartacus," hopefully you'd remember their version of a bard that is simply a lyrical and spoken-word story-telling bard. That is what I envision mostly of Bayard... but that is not to say he does not get bored and hum or sing once in awhile.

Now, comes the question of "what class is Bayard?" You'll know the answer eventually, but you just need to pay attention to the clues. It's quite obvious what he is. The bigger question is why does he introduce himself as a bard first rather than what his fighting class is?

All will be revealed in due time (hee, mean!) and I really hope you guys enjoy Prodigy. After this, I do have a story plot waiting for me. It does involve someone of a druid class—not Rune, he needs to continue wallowing in self-pity and suffering a little more before he can be truly happy. And a demon will be involved... maybe even two.

:)

In the meantime, just enjoy Prodigy.